Thursday, 20 November 2014

Procedural Writing: Sandwich Making for Lunch


  1. I think it was very good but maybe be a bit more descriptive

  2. It could well be but I also think that you could explain to the Girls why it would need to be a bit more descriptive. Its a work in progress as well, its not just finished with what the students are doing and they will be continuing to work on it, dont forget when you leave a comment to state your URL so we can comment back and return the feedback.
    Mr Webb