Tuesday, 12 May 2015

Aimee's Writing Example from England

We're always looking for fantastic examples of students work to use in class. One piece of writing that we found the other day came from Aimee in England. Its a piece of narrative writing describing events during the Blitz in London. It created a fantastic discussion with students in Room Three in Auroa about feelings and how it would have been different during this time. We looked at the language that Aimee had used and loved the experience.  You can click on this link to her writing here.


  1. Thank you very much for sharing your video. I feel honoured that you have used my work. Could you provide me with some feedback? What did you like about it? What could I improve?

    Thank you again for commenting. I hope we can stay I touch.

    From Aimee, Langold Dyscarr Community School, England

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